Our topic this term is Land,Sea & Sky. In room 7 we have been learning about plants. This week we had to write a Poem about plants, Mrs P gave us A writing model to copy. In the writing we had to describe a Dead Plant.
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Good morning Lucy, Its Kaia I hope you're having a good day today. I really liked the poem that you wrote I think its very well described. Maybe next time you could work on making the font bigger but altogether It was a really good poem. Nice work and keep it up. Make sure to check out my blog at http://pcskaiap.blogspot.co.nz Bye :) Kaia
Aloha Lucy, my name is Lavinia from Waikowhai Primary School. I'm in Hauraki. I really like how you used descriptive language. What you could work on for next time is you could add more info about plants, other than that Ka Pai!!! If you want to see my blog heat to, http://wpslaviniac.blogspot.co.nz/. See Ya Later!!!
Good morning Lucy,
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I really liked the poem that you wrote I think its very well described. Maybe next time you could work on making the font bigger but altogether It was a really good poem. Nice work and keep it up.
Make sure to check out my blog at http://pcskaiap.blogspot.co.nz
Bye :)
Kaia
Hi Kaia,
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I really appropriate you coming on my blog & commenting
I have fix the font size so thank you for that
Thanks
Aloha Lucy, my name is Lavinia from Waikowhai Primary School. I'm in Hauraki. I really like how you used descriptive language. What you could work on for next time is you could add more info about plants, other than that Ka Pai!!! If you want to see my blog heat to, http://wpslaviniac.blogspot.co.nz/. See Ya Later!!!
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